based othis poem, you sound amazingly beautiful. women are meaner then men when it comes to judging beauty, at least on the outside. oddly enough they can see more beauty on the inside siometimes. great poem! brings up a lot of questionsabout what true beauty is really. i look forward to reading more of your work :)
haha great story. longer then i thought it was gonna be when i first started reading it, but it is a really quick read. i think it is very well paced and you make the narrarator really likable. end up having a lot of sympathy for the poor guy by th end of the story. good job :)
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