Hi there! Amazing poem you got here! I can tell you are a poet! :)
Even though your poem was so short, I felt more emotion in it than most poems three times as long! I also love how you added an 'In loving memory of-', it really just shows your purpose of writing the poem and how much you really care. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem!
Before I read or review your poem, I just want to say that I think this website must know I love reviewing poems, because it always gives me beautiful poems to review!
Wow! I really loved reading this poem! It is such beautifully written! I love it when poets, like yourself, start their poem with something, and then end their poem with the same words! In your case it would be:
"Till the sun stops shining?
How long for the well runs dry?"
I'm not sure why I adore this style of writing so much, I just think ending a poem like that really wraps up the entire poem, like a conclusion paragraph to an essay!
I definitely enjoyed trying to figure out the theme of this beautifully written poem. I love poems that I need to break apart to understand! I just really love how the poem sounds overall!
You just definitely keep writing poems like this! Thank you so much for sharing! :)
Wow! This is great! For some reason, I really like short stories like this, with only dialogue. I can just imagine a couple having this argument, staring at three cute and scared rabbits. You really put an image in my head. Thank you so much for sharing!
Wow! I could really visualize all the characters and settings! You explained everything so wonderfully! Very, very well written. My favorite part was when you told about all the kids and adults squeezing together in the car. You explained that (and every other part) part so well! Incredible job!
This is so good! It's super short and filled with dialogue, which I really like about it. The short story has such a good plot, I'd really love to see a full story!
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