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Review of Snowy  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
It is short but very entertaining. You captured your theme well. Write on ! *Smile*
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Review of God  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I agree on your views about God. No one is like Him, Keep on writing!
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Review of One Love  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
It's a beautiful poem about love and the flow is good too. Keep on writing!
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Review of Love Hurts  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Truly love hurts. The good thing is learning how to love. The poem is full of emotions. Write on!
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Review of Dear God  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's inspiring and very true. I like the last line. Thanks for sharing. Write on!
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Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
You are able to capture your theme in your poem. It's full of emotions and the flow is good. Write on!
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Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the title of your poem relating it to love. It's creative too. Write on!
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Review of Faces of God  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's a beautiful poem about God and very true. Keep on writing!
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Review of Paranoia  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
You captured the word "paranoia" in your poem. However, I noticed the word "peering" should be "peeping" or "peep out." Just a suggestion. Write on!
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Review of What is Love?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the brief explanation of love in 1Corinthians 13. It is very true and it says it all about love. Have a Blessed Christmas! Write on!
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Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It is a good story and the title is good too. It makes me want to read it and find
out what's in the fig tree. Good job! Write on!
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Review of Why Do I Write  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The theme is good for all those who have passion in writing. I like the last line. Keep on writing! Merry Christmas!
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Review of I LOVE TO LITTER!  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
The theme of your poem is good and it is well written too. Keep on writing!
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Review of LED BY A STAR  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's beautiful and I enjoy reading your poem. Thanks for sharing your poem. Merry Christmas!

ladygrace
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Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The theme is good and it is true. However, I'm quite confused on the form if it is an essay or a poem. Just a suggestion. Keep on writing!
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Review of Grey matter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the theme of your poem about self realization and how you present it in your poem. It's good. However, the form of the poem is not that achieved. Just a suggestion. Keep on writing!
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Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Your theme is good especially for the younger ones. I hope you lengthen your essay and write about the disadvantages of pre marital sex, cite instances of true to life story of younger ones who had pre marital sex and its outcome in his or her life. This will serve as a warning and lesson for the generations to come. Keep on writing!
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Review of love and hate  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The emotion is there in your poem but not that deep. I hope you lengthen your poem. Just a suggestion. Keep on writing!
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Review of Unchangeable  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The depth of feeling is achieved in your poem. It's like a love letter turn into a poem. Keep on writing!
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Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The flow of your poem is good. I think you have talent in writing but you have to use and practice it for you to be more effective. Write on!
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Review of Snowfall  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
You are creative and have a broad imagination. It is good that you use figurative language in comparing snow falls as it is one of the elements of a good poem. I like the fourth stanza. You succeeded in showing your theme clearly and after reading your poem I feel relax. Keep on writing!
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Review of TWO ROSES  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
The flow of your poem is good. However, I noticed words such as "twu' should be "two" and "carriny" should be "carrying." I noticed too some phrases must be punctuated as in line, "As I reach you my eyes remain on you" should be "As I reach you, my eyes remain on you." Just a suggestion. Keep on writing!
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Review of In the mirror  Open in new Window.
Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The depth of feeling is achieved in your poem and the flow is good too. However, I noticed the word "i" should be capitalized and the word "rythem" should be "rhythm." Just a suggestion. Keep on writing!
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Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's very touching and very true. I'm a mother too and it reminds me that mother's love is the purest love of all. I like the last part of your personal essay truly in our Father's arms we find comfort and home. God bless!
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Review by ladygrace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for all the lessons and reminders. I learned many things. God bless!
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