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Review by ed curlee Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Staring at each other----yes and time vanishes for a moment. Wonderful. Secrets smartly hidden---you go girl, I know that feeling. This story brought me into your world. The only thing I would say is watch the spelling. I proof-read myself 3x THEN have someone else read it, just to make sure. This is Ed and I'm delighted to review your writing. Be blessed.
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Review by ed curlee Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
your rhymes are interesting, the tears for a boy says a lot. I would like to see something that's a little more upbeat, but good writing here.
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Review by ed curlee Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
You have lovely imagery, which takes my mind to familiar places and thoughts. I think it's time to take all this energy to the next level. Dig a little deeper & see what your imagination discovers. Nice work. Can't wait to see what's next.
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Review by ed curlee Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I like the style & the fact that I can sit back & enjoy the imagery that goes through my head. The phrasing suggests a romantic place in time gone by. I await what comes next!! Well done.
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Review by ed curlee Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
It was hilarious, very informative! Just one!
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