Staring at each other----yes and time vanishes for a moment. Wonderful. Secrets smartly hidden---you go girl, I know that feeling. This story brought me into your world. The only thing I would say is watch the spelling. I proof-read myself 3x THEN have someone else read it, just to make sure. This is Ed and I'm delighted to review your writing. Be blessed.
You have lovely imagery, which takes my mind to familiar places and thoughts. I think it's time to take all this energy to the next level. Dig a little deeper & see what your imagination discovers. Nice work. Can't wait to see what's next.
I like the style & the fact that I can sit back & enjoy the imagery that goes through my head. The phrasing suggests a romantic place in time gone by. I await what comes next!! Well done.
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