The pattern of the poem is very clear, which is why I am actually really surprised that the meaning of the poem is actually extremely vague. While the poem does lack a clear meaning, it nonetheless does contain a meaning that is understandable. A good read in the end.
I really must admit that the amount of emotion that you have in this poem, given how short it is is a true testament to just how good this is. I like seeing the way you make it possible for the reader to be able to visualize what is written. I am impressed with the excellent flow of the poem also.
Truly a well put together and thought out story. I really must admit that I was not expecting for such a short story to be able to actually have the level of enjoyment that you would expect from a longer story. I am left wishing that there was more to read.
I read this and it really makes the message that nothing is ever lost until you give up on finding it. Truly shows that you should never be hasty to replace anything because some things are too valuable to be replaced. Certainly a great way of teaching the lesson that nothing should be taken for granted.
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