Very nice way of writing u got there. Especially the part where you said "Yes, I have cancer but cancer doesn't have me. Okay? ". That was really a point made there. One thing I would like to say is, more than gathering a time to fight against our enemy during hard times, it would be best to gather a team that would sustain each other with great support and love towards ourselves. Keep writing and I would love to read more from you :)
I am not a big expert in poems but I definitely enjoyed reading your poem. I like the way how it all rhymes nicely :) The genre of romance is something so vast. It kindles so many emotions in just one person at different times in different situations. I like how you brought one such emotion in this poetry of yours. Do keep writing! All the best!
I happened to be looking through the contest listings when I came across you piece. I am not so sure how much your piece relates to the contest criteria as I am also new to WDC. However on its own, your piece definitely got me interested. I like the way how you have created a sense of attachment towards the oak tree. Personally environmental issues are things that should be given a lot of attention to and I can confidently say that your writing has in one way contributed the cause. Keep writing! I wish you all the best to win the contest :))
Hello! I really liked your story. Basically I kept reading to find out what really happened and I feel that this is exactly what determines whether a story is good or not. So congratulations on your story. It was a good one!
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