i really enjoyed this. the only thing i woulds said is you repeat your self a lot. but over all it was great. i thing the piont is one that needed to be made people take reviewers for granted. i know i get excied when someone reviews my work it means the world to me. i do get afriad that maybe they won't take me seriouly becuase I'm dyslexic and i don't always spell thing right
I love it the only thing I would advice is that you um cap the words because for me it was hard to read well it could just be that I'm distexic so maybe it just me i don't no it just something to think about but the poem is fantastic
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