*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/elytblankling
Review Requests: ON
1 Public Reviews Given
1 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of The One I Loathe  
for entry "Chapter 4" 
Review by ElytBlank
Rated: E | (4.0)
I was such a shame should be it was such a shame in chapter 2 and intersection should be an intersection in chapter 3
in chapter 4 I think the theater kids scene was very grounded in stereotypes and if re-written could come off as a little bit less cringy
I'm enjoying the story and will let you know what I think about chapters 5-8 when I get through them
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/elytblankling