This poem was very beautiful. I do not know much about Glaucoma or its symptoms, but you are a very talented writer and I hope that you live a long, fullfilled life continuing to share your heartfelt poetry with Writing.com and whoever else is lucky enough to read it.
Your poem about the Virginia Tech shooting made mine look really bad :) I really liked your poem you have a nice melodic way of writing and it was very touching and at the same time moving. They have been showing it where I live a lot. It's burnt into my memory. I especially like the lines,
"Twas on the 16th of April
That 32 were taken
The horror, grief, and disbelief
Our nation awoke, shaken"
They were very moving. I hope you continue to write and I'm glad there's a soul out there with such a kind heart
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