Very deep, emotional poem. I'm kind of going through a similar situation and I'm desperately trying to figure out a way to escape it. One thing I can for sure is, find the courage to rise above it. It's never too late to turn things around.
I also liked the style of the poem, the way it was written.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing,
Emily Feliciano
Nice poem, I get a sense that you were having fun while writing this, maybe you even had a smile too. The last paragraph, particularly the last two sentences, kind of lost me though. But other than that, it was fun to read.
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