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Review of The Waitress  
Review by Brian
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was well thought out and very funny. I found some parts to be too wordy but I saw the necessity in other parts of the story.

Great!

Brian Norton
enough2011
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Review by Brian
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Interesting story with lot's of potential but I am afraid that you lost me because it was too "wordy" I would suggest that it is a simple topic that could have been more comical of it was expressed in more simpler terms.

Keep writing, WE all need to practice daily. At least you are actioning more than I lately. I have to get over my fear of releasing my work. Good luck.
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Review by Brian
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well thought out. One of the paragraphs I felt was slightly out of harmony insofar as length but otherwise it was great to read.

Brian Norton ( enough2011)
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Review by Brian
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My name is Brian ( enough2011). I was very touched by your therapeutic message. I hope most of all that it helped you in writing about your horrific youth. People like your father are really sick and we cannot change people like them. All we can do is change ourselves by either standing up to them which is hard to do or leaving them which is also difficult but so often the only option to take.

I am in the process of writing a book, mostly about my life but it will be a novel for many reasons. The title is enough is enough, to figure.

Best of luck, you have my sincerest respect for your courage.

Brian
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