This was simply amazing! (I hope there's a part two out so I can read it :D) I felt like I was in the story, and I was surprised when it ended, feeling like my thoughts had ended too... :D Keep up the good work and hopefully I'll see the end of this story! :P
-Minuit
This was really interesting and well written. I love reading stories like this, that sound familiar but have their own story-line and thoughts to it. Keep writing, and make more stories like this! They're really great!
That was amazing! My stories....I wish mine were as great as yours. You made me feel like I was in the story, and I cowered when I got to the part of the earthquake! :D
Keep writing is all I can say! It was very descriptive and I see nothing wrong!
-Minuit
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