Great inspirational piece, being a newbie myself to writing I wont offer any technical advise so I will just say I enjoyed this read, nice work and keep writing.FP
I don't have expertise to critique your work so I will just leave this.. I really enjoyed reading your poem, it is full of hope and promise for a much brighter future which we as a species need if we want to survive without destroying ourselves. We all need to adopt this mindset, thanks for sharing.
What a beautiful piece you have here, I'm far from being qualified to give any advise (not that any is needed) so I will just tell you how much I enjoyed reading this lovely write, very touching indeed.
A well written poem, I like the way you structured it giving the reader a sense of being apart of it. how it depicts the pain, sadness and fear of family violence. I am a survivor of family violence and this hit me real hard, thanks for sharing this dark but wonderful piece. FP
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