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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, Kotaro.

I enjoyed reading your short story. *StarStruck* Your short story reminded me of Knight Rider TV show series and Robocop movies in the 1980s and early 1990s.

Your characters, especially Detective Larson Scandy and Robert with his special SUV*Wink*, were great with conflict. Also, I laughed a little bit at the g-string. *Smile*

One suggests (Remember just a suggest; feel free to ignore the suggest.), please:
“Take a seat and close the door.”
Close the door and take a seat.”

Thank you so much for sharing!

~FD
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Review of GRATEFUL HEART  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Naomi,

Your Acrostic poem was beautiful! Indeed, an uplift feeling; up and down, but I'm all right.

I don't write poetry and short stories since I had a serious Stroke, but I can read. *Smile* So, you have an amazing poem that speak to my soul and it's great.

Thank you so much for your sharing!

~FD
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Dear, Hooves,

Your non-fiction story was entertaining and funny! I enjoyed reading your story, and I love your picture of Boo.

I'll pray (If you allow my praying) for you, Mr. Hooves or mott Author Icon, and Boo. To this day, I pray and talk to my mom and my dad who passed away many years ago. *Smile*

Thank you so much for sharing your story with us.

*Heart**Hug1**Smile**Hug2**Heart*

~FD
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Review of The Drift  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Bill.

This was awesome! I love your Horror Flash Fiction! *StarStruck* Jon and the snow was vivid and descriptive. The setting was the cabin, the splintered chairs, tables, cupboard doors, floorboards, and the snow. Your plot was when living alone Jon was trapped in a high mountaintop and the cabin with the snow.

I saw no grammar and no mechanics.

Thank you so much for sharing! Keep on writing, please!

~FD
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, there, Ichabod Crane.

I love your Word Search of Have a Holly Jolly Christmas, and I love listening to Burl Ives' Have a Holly Jolly Christmas on YouTube.

Just for fun at your Word Search of Have a Holly Jolly Christmas, I began at 8:27 p.m. on WdC time, and I ended at 8:50 p.m. on WdC time.

Thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the community.

Merry Christmas! *Smile*

~FD
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Review of Christmas Names  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Ichabod Crane.

I love your Word Search of Christmas Names! Ah, I remember George Bailey in "It's a Wonderful Life," and Kevin in "Home Alone" and in "Home Alone 2" (if it's not Kevin in "Home Alone" and "Home Alone 2", then please forgive me.)

Again, you did an amazing job with your words.

Just for fun, I began at 1:40 p.m. on WdC time, and I ended at 2:07 p.m. on WdC time.

Thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the community.

~FD
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, Detective.

I enjoyed reading your short story. Your opening sentences hook me. I love your description and your dialogue. Your short story was smooth and easy to read.

Indeed, three men found what they had on the hidden, secret room. You began and ended your short story on the right time. I love this.

One tiny bit of suggestion, please (Remember, just suggestion. Feel free to ignore.): Paragraph 3 - “Well, see, it’s like this,” Elwood said. “This place used to be owned by Micky Morelli, one of Don Vito Morelli’s boys. The Morellis used this place for some of their, uh, business as it were. Mickey’s supposed to have hidden a couple million dollars somewhere here in the Coconut Cove before he got whacked."

Thank you so much for sharing your short story with me and the community.

~FD
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Amethyst Snow Angel.

I love your Word Search of A Sweet and Spicy Season! I, especially, love apples, figs, pears, peppermint, plums, and raisins! *Hungry* *Smile*

Again, you did a brilliant job with your words.

Just for fun, I began at 11:16 a.m. on WdC time, and I ended at 11:37 a.m. on WdC time.

Thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the community.

~FD
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, AmyJo-2025 refund, please!.

Whew! I finished! *Bigsmile* I love your Word Search of Very Merry Christmas, and I love Christmas! You did a brilliant job with your words.

Just for fun, I began at 1:27 p.m. on Writing.Com time, and I ended at 2:18 p.m. on Writing.Com time.

Thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the community!

~FD
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, there, Ichabod Crane.

I love your Word Search of Go Tell It on a Mountain! I enjoy listening to YouTube videos of Go Tell It on a Mountain.

Just for fun at your Word Search of Go Tell It on a Mountain, I began at 11:02 a.m. on WdC time, and I ended at 11:30 a.m. on WdC time.

I thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the community!

~FD
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Ichabod Crane.

I love your Word Search of Little Drummer Boy. Again, I enjoyed listening to Bing Crosby and watching the little drummer boy.

Just for fun at your Word Search of Little Drummer Boy, I began at 10:14 p.m. on WdC time, and I ended at 10:37 p.m. on WdC time.

Thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the Writing.Com community.

~FD
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Review of First Noel  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Ichabod Crane.

I love your Word Search of First Noel. Also, I enjoy listening to The First Noel on YouTube.

Just for fun at your Word Search of First Noel, I began at 12:57 p.m. on Writing.Com time, and I ended at 1:34 p.m. on Writing.Com time.

Thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the Writing.Com community.

~FD
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Review of The Habit  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, Bill.

I just stop by to read your micro flash fiction, The Habit. I love the innocent, young, girl. I was sad to read that a woman lost her life, and I don't like Harold.

Karma was a great thing regarding to the young girl life.

Thank you so much for sharing.

~FD
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Review of Hugh Dunnit  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, Bill.

I love your short story! Your short story, Hugh Dunnit, was funny, unique, and original. I love Hugh character, and I love Monique character. And I love your vivid described and setting.

It's a joy to read your short stories. All your short stories are great, but my favorite would be your Horror/Scary Folder. *BigSmile*

Thank you so much for sharing!

~FD
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Review of Turkey Disaster  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Amethyst Snow Angel.

I love your Word Search of Turkey Disaster! Also, I Google Jack Prelutsky, and I love his poem above you. Thank you for introducing me to him.

Just for fun at your Turkey Disaster Word Search, I began at 3:27 p.m. on WdC time and I ended at 3:54 p.m. on WdC time.

Thank you so much for your Word Search with me and the community.

~FD
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, StephBee.

I love your "Thanksgiving Word Search" Open in new Window.! You did an amazing job with your words.

Just for fun at your Thanksgiving Word Search, I began at 11:07 a.m. on WdC time and I ended at 11:30 a.m. on WdC time.

Thank you so much for sharing with me and the community.

~FD
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Review of All about Poems  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, StephBee.

I love your Word Search of "All about Poems" Open in new Window.! You did an amazing job with your words.

Just for fun at your Word Search, I began at 1:37 p.m. on WdC time and I ended at 1:40 p.m. on WdC time.

Thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the community!

~FD
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Review of Craftmanship  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello, Bill.

I love your Horror Flash Fiction of "Craftmanship" Open in new Window.! Also, I love two characters in Flash Fiction, generally. Nice job.

I read right through your Horror Flash Fiction and your "Crafsmanship" was brilliant. I wasn't expecting that. It gave me chilled to see imps for the moment. *Smile* Well done.

Thank you so much for sharing.

~FD
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello, StaiNe.

I love your Stephen King Books Word Search! Again, you did an excellent job with your words.

I enjoy reading your wonderful fact of Stephen King's Books and I love your image of Little Stain.

Thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the community!

~FD
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Review of Spooky Music  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Amethyst Snow Angel.

I enjoyed your Word Search of "Spooky Music" Open in new Window.! You did an amazing job with your words.

I recognize two words on your Word Search: Demons and Radioactive. I love Imagine Dragons.

Thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the community.

~FD
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello, Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ 2025.

Congratulation on your First Place winning entry in the June 2014, Journey Through Genres, mystery prompt. *Delight* *Heart*

I love your "One Long Day in Chicago" Open in new Window.! Your Lou Ryan character was great and spot on regarding his skilled as a Private Detective. The plot was when Lou Ryan helps out Gloria's, her brother, Gary, who he was arrested, and Lou Ryan find the real killer. I love your smooth and unique Chicago 1930s style and voice. Your setting was Lou Ryan's office, the speakeasy, a three-story brownstone, and the studio apartment. I enjoyed read Lou Ryan's thought. I love the way you began with Lou Ryan, and you ended with Lou Ryan. Excellent job!

Thank you so much for sharing.

~FD
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Review of The Sun Also Sets  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Hooves,

I love your short story! Your short story was fun, and I learned something new.

How wonderful you appreciate Mr. Ernest Miller Hemingway. *Heart* I'm glad that they (the individuals) no longer live on Writing.Com.

Thank you so much for sharing your short story!

~FD or C. *BigSmile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, 👼intuey.

I love your Stephen King Word Search! You did an excellent job with your words.

Just for fun, on WDC's Word Search System, I time myself to begin and to finish. I began at 10:47 a.m. on WDC time and I finished at 11:29 a.m. on WDC time.

Thank you so much for sharing your Word Search with me and the community.

~FD
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Review of The Wick Effect  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello, Kotaro.

Again, another great short story! I love reading your horror short stories! Detective Steve Kobayashi must find the killer, but he can't solve the case. Excellent! Well done! Good luck with "The Wick Effect" Open in new Window. on "Horror Writing Contest" Open in new Window.!

Thank you so much for sharing with me and the community!

~FD
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Review of Intent  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, Bill.

What can I say? I love this horror short story! When Robert Gonzalez and Jax was along, I thought it was Robert who turn into a vampire. *FacePalm* *BigSmile* The setting was the woods at midnight and frat house. There was emotional conflict. Your plot was clear and believable: Jax tried to send two young pledges frat and Robert, another young pledges frat North meanwhile Jax got upset because Jax knew he planned was set, but when Robert and Jax was along horror began. The characters was two young men, Jax, who I unlike, and Robert Gonzalez. Your dialog seem consistent with their personalities--three personalities good and one personality bad. I saw no grammatical errors and no misspellings. Great horror short story!

Thank you so much for sharing.

~FD
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