Beautiful. Let me know if you ever come back on. I love my Daddy-Dom too! And its hard to find people on here who mention the word 'Daddy' in this way.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. You have a deep understanding of how a submissive feels, to be able to portray that depth of need and intensity. My only complaint, is that I wish there had been more to read! But I understand that this is a short story. I look forward to reading any other stories you may write.
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