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Rated: E | (5.0)
A great read! Professionally done. Furthermore, if we evolved then why is it that we are not still evolving? Perhaps it is easier for many to believe in something they think may be able to be explained than it is to believe based on faith and an unexplainable knowledge that comes only from our Creator and is embedded within our hearts, souls and minds. My blogs:
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Review of Breathing For Two  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Sound like song lyrics - the meaning really seems to describe codependency in its rawest form.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Another good one - packed with emotion. Keep writing until the emotion of the writing turns uplifting and light hearted. This way you will have a complete path representing the lows all the way through to the ups. You have talent in expressing your emotions - keep writing, Write until you are out of words - then find more words and write some more.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem is packed with emotion that I can so relate too. Anyhow, kudos for putting something so personal and delicate in writing. I look forward to reading more of your words!
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Great story. I read it to my 9 year old daughter and she really enjoyed this story. I think it's great that you did not force your interests on your daughter and let her pursue her own interests. Thanks for sharing your words! Ms. Emotionalist
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Great narrative story! I love the ending, very creative. This narrative could also be told by a grandmother who has passed on and is now talking to her spouse of many years that is about to join her in the afterworld. I look forward to reading more of your words. If you get a chance, please take time to read some of my work. Thanks. Ms. Emotionalist
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