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Review of Be My Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love your use of words. It brings to mind such visions.

"Do you starve for this visionary
to fill your void?
Do I weave my tapestry of fantasy,
black peeled away by light?
Be my eyes tonight." <-- my favorite

Thank you for the note at the end because I was thinking the same thing. *Smile*

Thank you for sharing this and good luck in the contest!

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Review of Bumble Boy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh my gosh, the ending had me so sad. Poor Jonathan had finally found something that brought him happiness and it was taken away. My heart went out to him so many times throughout the story. I couldn't stand the way his father treated him.

I wish there was something more positive that would have taken place in the ending. Even if it was his dad treating him better.

A great read. Thank you for sharing the story.

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Review of Uncut Diamond  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I thought this was a cute story. You created characters that were relatable. I like that Javed was able to see past Saima's outside and see the potential beauty on the inside. I do have a few suggestions.

*Check2*The appealing smell of tea waved from the kitchen. Change waved to wafted.

*Check2*“Saima, won’t you go to office today?” An elderly woman asked.I would suggest inserting the in between to and office.

*Check2*Nasira actually meant: “How old are you?” Even a month before, the thirty-six-year-old lady got a proposal from a forty- year- old. The relationship did not establish only because the man’s mother thought that Saima was “too old” for her son.I was kind of lost here. I didn't know if you were referring to Saima or Nasira. Towards the end I am assuming it is Saima because you mention her, but you might want to clarify that a little more.

Again, these are just suggestions. *Smile* Thanks for sharing your story. Write on!

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Review of My Mother's Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A lovely poem. It is so true when it comes to mothers. Their love is unconditional. Your mother must of cried when she read this. I know I would have if my daughter wrote this. :)

Write on!

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Review by Flipsideofevil Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, well happy birthday to you! Five years is a long time and I can see you love WD.C. I can understand why because I am new and I already love it. :) I hope you receive lots of seeds.

Write on!

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Review of Thirteen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
What a sweet poem for your daughter. I can see how much you love her.

Write on!

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Review of My wife  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Aww, what a lovely poem for your wife. I'm happy that you two have made it and are still going strong. Best wishes to you both.


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Review of Reviewer's Club  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a great idea! I like to review and would be happy to help.


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