A very fun story with some interesting and well-written ideas. It is nowhere near as mean-spirited as some other Master PC stories I have read in the past.
Nicely done. I'm glad that you included the photograph. It was a nice bit of misdirection that you did not specifically mention the object that you were describing as beautiful until the second stanza of the poem. It gave the impression that you were describing a friend or a lover and not a street scene.
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