Sparkette's (folkloreate) Reviews

Sparkette

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#4648746

Review of Horizons

Review by Sparkette

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

I'm not generally a big fan of poetry but I found this really good and easy for me to absorb. It made me feel- something. Good work. You're clearly better with words than I.

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#4646031

Review of Loving You

Review by Sparkette

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really like the flow of this piece. But the part with the dialogue bit confused me a little. But all in all very easy to read, I thought it was headed to a dark place at first but was glad when it turned to something more light hearted toward the end. All in all nice work.

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#4645552

Review of Lesson Two - Writing Assignment

Review by Sparkette

Rated: E

| (4.0)

This bit of writing was easy to follow. It reminds me of a blog entry or journaling. The numbers were very distracting, but I'm guessing that has something to do with the fact this is an assignment of some kind? I would remove them for displaying the writing on this site but that's just me. Unless they reference something that I'm totally missing? All in all looks like a pretty successful writing excercise. I read the whole thing with ease and it's about a subject matter I have very little interest in. That's a good sign. 👍

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#4645303

Review of BLUE CURMUDGEON

Review by Sparkette

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I'm not generally a fan of poetry or limerick or whatever, but this really caught me with it's rhythm. I loved it. Very cute and easy to follow and read. I don't really have any words for improvement, it seems to be a complete and fun quick read. :) I take it he's been blue now for some time and this is the backstory? Very cute. Keep up the excellent work!

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#4645238

Review of Mystery

Review by Sparkette

Rated: E

| (4.5)

The piece is well written, I like how the colonel is female. I feel a bit fooled for reading it to it's end. One of those won won wooon moments. Not sure how I feel about "mystery" as the primary word for their dilemma and confusion. But all in all a good piece of writing. Funny. :)

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#4645018

Review of A Main Character Moment

Review by Sparkette

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I like your usage of the 2nd person point-of-view. I would recommend editing to catch a few simple grammatical errors and breaking the work into paragraphs so it's more readable. Overall, it was a relatable piece of writing that communicates a moment or perspective, but still requires some polishing to be considered a finished piece. Keep producing and refining your craft. Good luck.