That is absolutely beautiful. If this is from a true story, it is very similar to mine. I can relate to everything in this wonderful poem. I have to note how impressive it is that you followed a style the whole poem and still managed to create very real emotion. Beautiful job.
Very beautiful! I know the feeling, but but for a different reason, perhaps. I like this format, like my poems, they're not in the typical style of poems ... I appreciate reading that, it feels like it comes from a more real place. Very well written!
This is wonderful 'advice' ... is it advice? This is how I live my life. I have struggled to get there, but it's really worth it. This is beautiful writing and words that are true. I especially like the part about paying attention to each person's feelings.
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