I recently lost my mother to a long illness, and can appreciate every word you penned so honestly. Great flow and clear imagery. Thank-you for sharing.
You have conveyed some familiar feelings in a realistic, tactile way. I really like how you bring the reader with you on your journey home. I think if you switched the word 'however', I still feel the claw... for - but, I still feel the claw...the great pace of the piece would be more consistent. Thank-you!
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