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12 Public Reviews Given
12 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Well, since I am so new my critiques mainly consist of my experience while reading the story.
I'm good at...
Looking at a story from a very basic point of view, I'll most likely read it as a student would read it.
Favorite Genres
Anything that isn't straight-up porn.
Least Favorite Genres
Straight-up porn
Favorite Item Types
Most items.
Least Favorite Item Types
Long poems need to be very capturing to keep me in.
I will not review...
Only porn really, it isn't what I am looking to read.
Public Reviews
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Review of Armor dusted  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
So first things first, I'm probably not the best person to ask for poetry. However, I do like the poem. It isn't very long, but it was a nice read. I do have a soft spot for poetry like this, which most likely stems from my love of vague meanings in songs. So I do like the imagery and little nudges the poem gives instead of plain and simple lines. Keep up the good work, and I'd love to review another poem of yours if you do make a longer one!
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Review of A Mime's Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A great poem! I really don't have anything else to say, but this was an entertaining read for sure!
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Review of SNOW MAN  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi, I think it's great for you to be trying a language that is different from your own! First things first, the story is nice. Even though the grammar is choppy at parts, I really liked the tale and it was charming. There are lots of fixes I'm sure many people have told you, so rather than stating them I want to suggest Grammarly. Although there is a premium option, the free version will work wonders for you. I hope you achieve all your goals, and this is quite a good start!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very heartwarming. Though it did have some out of place phrases.
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Review of The Morning After  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like it! It has a tone of regret and makes the reader feel bad for the character they are reading about. Well done!
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Review of A Glass of Water  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Aw, I love this story. The pacing is nice, and for such a simple plot to seem like a genius story is an incredible accomplishment! I love it!
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