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Review by FruitPunch Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Our new path led us to another island with a large obelisk made of solid ebony marble. The island seemed very much like our old island save for the large pillar that adorned its sands. We left the sanctuary of our arks and investigated the towering obelisk. At the base, a door marred the perfect surface of the monolith; above it, a sign: WELCOME ALL WHO MAY ENTER
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Review by FruitPunch Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Until it soared ever higher and it's rays reached beyond Endlessly, ever onward forged the alien dawn Maddeningly, methodical. Illuminating my wrong Blindingly, emanating reflections of gold The wrong? It turned right while I soon grew cold Defeated and weary I coveting it not I will lie down beside it and wither and rot
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