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Review of Night Song  Open in new Window.
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what a wonderful poem, it not only holds a lot of power but it also has good flow and rhythm, my favorite part was the last two lines, bravo! you truly are a wonderful poet, thank you for the wonderful read


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Review of Hanging in There  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Happy Halloween

*Cat* *Ghost* *Jackolantern* *WitchHat*


Hi,


When I first looked at the pic you have on there I thought. Wow! O_O, I for one and scared of heights. and then i went

done the page and read your poem. and I thought,Wow!, this person is vary good at writing. I felt like I was right

there looking up at him calming and I hoped that he wouldn't fall. my favorite part is


Air whips briskly around him, gusty and strong,

Alarm bells go off in his head;

A capricious event that could mean his swan song,

Anchored to the rock, he inches ahead.


because fist I get that oh no!! he fell!! feeling then a yeah!! his ok!! feeling. This is one of the best poems I have ever

had the enjoyment of read. It seems like something you would find in a big book of poems. Bravo!


Keep Writing,

Raven,


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1*Omg, O-O ok I just have to do this, awwwwwwwwwww *big hug*, Sorry if that was a little bit odd, lol, the first thing that comes to mind when I read this poem is a dream I had once, I don't remember when but it was of a lake that had a willow tree hanging over it, and all around was dogwood trees, I could tell that because they were in full bloom, in the dream I remember siting by the lake and talking to someone but I don't remember who it was or what we talked about. it's kind of odd but I kind of zoned out reading this poem which I have only had that happen when I'm writing poems, lol, and I don't mean that in a bad way what I mean by I zoned out reading it is that if some one tried to talk to me when I was reading it I wouldn't have even know they were talking, lol, This is something I think would be find in a book, the last part is what made we want to give you a hug, this poem has a lot of depth and power behind it, it dose the something Blue October dose to me. it made me feel kind of.... *sigh* I can't think of the word. this is a wonderful poem. thank you for posting it.

Keep Writing!
Song Bird*Vine2*
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Review of Mysterious Lady  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1*WOW,First Leonard de Vinci is one of my inspirations, This is a wonderful poem, My favorite thing about the Mona Lisa is that it's the size of a stamp, It's awesome. ^-^ I love your Poem. It shows the mystery behind her. More then just her smile, but everything about her. ^-^ Bravo! And it also makes people think too. The Flow and wording is perfect


Keep Writing!
Song Bird*Vine2*
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Review of Visual Poetry  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1*WOW, This is so cool, ^-^ I love how the shape the words make kind of look like the shadow of the heart at the end, The flow is perfect for this kind of poem, My favorite part has to be right there at the end, It puts a lot of emphases that WDC is like a home to you, ^-^ It made my heart feel all fuzzy and warm. ^-^ I'm all hyper now ^_^ lol, Thank you for the Wonderful read ^-^


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Song Bird*Vine2*
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Review of Embers  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1*Wow, This is a Wonderful poem, I mean wow I can't think of what to say, lol, It's perfect, There is nothing bad about it, Not one thing! My favorite part kind of feels a little off, But it feels like it belongs there too, I don't even know why it seems a little bit off, But It really made that part pop,"I sit here watching rake in hand water hose at my feet. But, alas, I am in pain for I can not extinguish the heat before me, nor the one inside." This poem has a lot of power behind it and this is something I would think to find in a book, Bravo!

Song Bird*Vine2*
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Review of Love on a Platter  Open in new Window.
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^-^ Omg!!!.. I love it! I found myself hoping it would work. My heart felt like a butterfly when it did, It has wonderful flow and wording, I loved every part about it when ever it didn't work I felt like giving you a big hug. I'm so happy it worked out, ^-^

Keep Writing,
Song Bird,
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Hello again,

^-^ I love this poem, Lol, It's cute and funny, had good flow, my favorite is the last part ^-^ I maybe be only 17 but what you said in this is something i learned the hard way, Not even love lasts forever it's hard work keeping it alive, and the longer it goes on the harder it is. but the good times are worth it I know you didn't say all that in this poem but that's want it made me think of, Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem

Keep Writing,
Song Bird,
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Review of Underestimated  Open in new Window.
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Hi,

I Love this poem, It has a wonderful story behind it, spot on flow, And wonderful wording. ^-^ My favorite part is were she shows that she's not just some flower, That she can also do anything they can, ^-^ I love it!!! Bravo!

Keep Writing,
Song Bird,
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Review of Identity  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1*Wow!, I find myself wanting to hug you, I understand what your trying to say I find myself feeling the same way, A lot, *hug* This poem has a lot of depth and power and perfect flow, You have inspired me to write a poem about how I see myself ^-^ Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.



Keep Writing!
Song Bird*Vine2*
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Review of I don't know  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1*This poem is very well written. I am however sad to see that in writing a poem about yourself you focused more on the things you cant do and don't know than you did on what you do know and can do. When it comes to knowing magick, practicing magick... There is only one thing you need to know. Magick is simply a tool that changes the world around you. When you see the world differently it becomes different. What we think we create. It's time you start creating for yourself the world you want instead of spending so much time contemplating how bad the life you have is. If you would like someone to talk to I would be more then halp to talk to you.

Keep Writing!
Song Bird*Vine2*
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*Vine1*Wow, This poem is wonderful a little dark, But wonderful. I say it's dark because all the butterflies died, But It's also really sweet. The thought of doing everything you can to make the ones you care about happy is a very strong way to live by, One that I for one like. I can relate to the butterflies, Because I would do anything to keep my friends from fighting and just to have them be happy. I love the flow and the rhythm. This is the kind of poem I would think to find in a book. Bravo! And Thank You for sharing this wonderful story.

Keep Writing!
Song Bird*Vine2*
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Review of Parting Friends  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1*I can understand the pain of losing a friend. I ones had a friend named Fay. we moved far away and I never got to see her again. I hope you and your friend has batter luck then me and Fay did. This is a wonderful poem. It has a good flow and has a lot of feeling in it. Thank you for sharing it.


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Song Bird*Vine2*
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*Vine1*omg. it's story is wounderful. i so wish this was a paper back or hard back book there is nothing wrong with it i reallt felt like i was right there i would read the other ones you have for this story on here but a lot of reading on the computer hurts my eyes. ( sadly ) i hope to see this book one day publshed. i have a feeling it would be a best seller. this is the best story i have ever read in cuding the ones that are best sellers. you did wounderful work on this. what ever you do don't stop wirting you have a gift for this.

Song Bird*Vine2*
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Review of Red and Orange  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1*ok this could be a wonderful poem it just need a little work on the flow a little well more world place meant then flow. here is a example of what i mean.

With a swift strike I spark into life,
struggling to grow into a roaring monster,
consuming everything in its sight.

I snap,crackle, and pop
as I’m fed dry,
brittle boughs of branches.
Soon my tongue is tantalized by soft,
gooey marshmallows dangling dangerously above my mouth.

i can really tell what your talking about. it just needs a little work here and
there to be more like a poem, but this could just be your style of poetry. so
do what ever you see best ^-^ ether way it's still a wonderful look on a bonfire ^-^

Keep Writing
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Review of UNDAMPABLE  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1* OK, this one needs some work it could be a really wonderful poem but it need a little tweaking like the lines
Unable
To be grasped
Properly, my motions
Slinky

you could have it

Unable
To be grasped
Properly,
my motions
Slinky

or

Unable
To be grasped
Properly,

my motions
Slinky

and the lines

for one brief
moment
quenched, the next
inextinguishable.

you could have it

for one brief
moment
quenched,
the next
inextinguishable.

and proletarians’ needs to be proletarians. the rest is wonderful and if you don't have to take my advice if you don't want to ^-^

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Review of HEAL THE BREACH  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1* Wow, This is the kind of poem that makes people think. ^-^ it's a wonderful poem. It's really vivid and has a wonderful flow. ^-^ It's really fluid like a waive, ^-^ How you see writing is amazing. I don't have a favorite part it's all amazing. ^-^

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Review of Motherhood  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1*^-^ this is a wonderful poem. the flow is perfect. i really like the last two lines but there a little off to me but that could just be me. it's still a wonderful poem and now that i think about it changing the wording could miss up the flow. i can't see anything that is a issue with this poem and the more i read it the more it doesn't seem so off so i think it was just me.

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Review of Alone in the dark  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1* Well, I don't know why you don't write more poems. For the olny one you have writen I wouldn't have know if you didn't say so. The flow is wounderful. I can really see the message behind it. You did Amazing for the first poem you have ever writen and I hope it will not be your last.

Song Bird*Vine2*
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Review of From The Cats  Open in new Window.
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Ok, i just have you say this, awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww there so cute, *BigSmile* My Favorite would have to be the onces with the black cats and the Standing Tall one. and again i have to say there really cute ^-^ i'm a big cat fan even if i'm a Bird lol i think i'm just going to save a link to this on my Favorites in case i ever need or want to send some one a cnote ^_^ there just sooooooooooooo cute

Song Bird,
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OK, I think this it a wounderful story. It really reminds me about my Papa. He always loved making things. we still have the toy car he made. there's not alot I reminber about him i mostly reminber him being sad alot of the time. i reminber how wounder it made me feel to see him smile. When i was youger him and my Nana got divorced and he never fully got over her. he was a lot happyer when I was older. me and my siblings were takeing Martial Arts close to the store he worked in so we would always stop by when we were waiting for are next class and just talk with them about his day and about how are days were going and about how are classes were going. i reminber most about him that he loved takeing Photos i have this one photo that he took of deer runing though the woods. he died when i was 14. one of the best things about him was that he always helped people even if they didn't ask. and there's one thing i know for sure no one ever really stops missed the people they care about.

thank you for sharing this story,
Song Bird,
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*Vine1*I really like the message behind this poem. it could use some work on the flow. but only a little bit. and some one else could think that i'm worng about that. so ya lol. it's still a wounderful poem. my favorite part is Life is short. so you've got to live and love,and never forget, all the struggles, and most importantly you've got to learn from them.

Song Bird,*Vine2*
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Review of To love someone  Open in new Window.
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*Vine1* Wow, this is a woundrful poem, I really like the message behind it and the way it flows. my favorite part would have to be,

Till the fear is extinguish
Till you walk in hope,

this poem really shows alot about true love. true love is hard but it's worth it.

Song Bird,*Vine2*
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i can't understand both sides of hunting why not to and why to. as long it's not just for sport i can undersatnd it if some one is going to use all if the Animal then there is a reson to hunt it. if some one is just going after it's head as a pize then i do not understand. but all in all it's to keep there form being so miny of them that there's isn't enfo food to sastan them. i can understand why not to kill them because i myself could never be able to hurt another liveing thing. but i do undersatnd the need for hunters and not just the humen onces. but besides all that i really do like this poem.

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ok first sorry i forgot to chage the one to a two on the last one. i think this is a wounderfull poem. and i think my mom would agree what that lol she dosen't do that much anymore but she has six kids and her oldessn't wouldn't let her lol but my older sister is now liveing with are nana so i'm the oldessn't kid in the house know so i can understand all of that seeing as i do alot around the house lol this is a wounderfull poem.

*Bird* *Music1*

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