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Review of first love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it. Keep writing.

Happy Holidays,
Gabriel S. New
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Review of Leaves  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like it, my friend. Good metaphor. Keep writing.


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Gabriel S. New
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Review by Gabriel S. New Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was a blast of flavor in the eyes, my friend. The introductory paragraph is weak and cliched, but the rest of it is strong and original. Please keep writing.


Happy Holidays,
Gabriel S. New
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www.gabrielsnew.tk
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Review of Emptiness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bang! Short and Sweet! Look forward to reading more from you.


Happy Holidays,
Gabriel S. New
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www.gabrielsnew.tk
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Review of Will and Thought  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I like this and I like the expression, however I want to bring it to your attention that the term "will" may not actually fit your intended purpose.


Happy Holidays,
Gabriel S. New
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www.gabrielsnew.tk
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Review of A thaw in winter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bang! I love it. It reminds me of William Carlos Williams. Please keep writing.
Happy Holidays,

Gabriel S. New
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www.gabrielsnew.tk

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Review by Gabriel S. New Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the feeling or the expression, it's not worth my time to pry the two apart and that's a trait of good emotional writing. I hesitate to inflate your ego further, but I look forward to reading more from you.
Happy Holidays,

Gabriel S. New
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www.gabrielsnew.tk
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Review of How is it done?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Reminds me of my own experience, and that's the most powerful tool a piece of writing can have.

Gabriel S. New
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www.gabrielsnew.tk
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Review by Gabriel S. New Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Doesn't quite come full circle but I love the imagery and subject matter.
Happy Holidays

Gabriel S. New
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www.gabrielsnew.tk
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Review of The Child  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Portentous. (And I don't mean Pretentious! :)
Please keep writing.
Happy holidays.

Gabriel S. New
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www.gabrielsnew.tk
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Review by Gabriel S. New Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I didn't have time to read this whole thing, but I dig the intro, it reads kind of like Ursula K. LeGuin or J.K. Rowling except a little more amateur. Work on polishing your style and gripping the reader with an open hand, perhaps by using fewer and stronger/more peculiar descriptive words.
And above all, keep writing my friend.

Gabriel S. New
www.gabrielsnew.tk
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