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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
this was very good need i say more
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
an interesting take on foot fetish unfortunately it doesn't have that much detail but it's a brilliant read nonetheless it could be improved by detailing how the boy feels rather than describing how it looks like he's feeling from 3rd person in general it's amazing it just should be in first person with changing perspectives
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
one of the best erotica's I've read unfortunately not a lot of people have helped expand it so it has a few empty chapters but it's still amazing
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Rated: E | (5.0)
the title made me think this would be an overly sentimental take on life when in reality it's anything but. it has rather good commentary on how mixed life is one complaint is that the poem made it seem like life is 50/50 good/bad when really it's more like 25/75 but that 25% is very much worth living for which is the other message in this i agree with overall it's an excellent poem talking about a topic that quite frankly needs more attention cause we can tilt life back towards mostly good if only we we're to try hard enough
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