I really liked this story. It's a neat twist on a traditional fairy tale and kept me hooked until the end. There are no wasted words, no awkward phrases and nothing to dtract from the central premise of the story. Well done.
I liked this piece. It's got a nice flow to the writing and the interest of the historical background. On a personal level, I wasn't too keen on the italics, apart from the letter.
I enjoyed this flash fiction story. It kept me interested and the twist at the end is neat. Just a couple of typos and one question? Who is Jack? My guess is that it's supposed to be Nick, so maybe a little more care in checking before uploading.
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