I have had this problem. Guys just want sex and nothing else.
"Missing your voice, missing your Talk" might be changed to 'Missing your voice and hearing your talk.'
'Chances are strong' as opposed to "Chances a nice."
There's a lot of emotion in this, could be really great with a few minor tweaks.
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