Wow Tom! You did it again! I'm so freakin' puzzled right now, I'm about to damage some property! What the heck was the damn sound?LOL. Truly an amazing piece and so simply written that you get hooked without even knowing it. I enjoyed it as is usual with your work. Keep it up and drop me a line when you have new stuff. Also, if you could read one of mine I would be honored. Later T
Amazing! The title kinda threw me but as I read on I really got the true understanding. Wow, what a description of the Angel of death,of the passing from this earth. What a beautiful parody between the first murder and the loss of this woman's life! I loved it! You are truly talented and I would be honoured if you would click Gee1 and read my story and give me some feedback. Excellent writing.
One word....AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!! Oh my God, that was amazing! Truly the best piece of Science fiction that I have ever read anywhere and I've been seriously reading since I was three! Dean Koontz eat you heart out. It was well written, there was just the right amount of humor, fear, drama and tragedy. Problem is, now I'm scared witless! But it was worth it. Thank you.
It would be a shame not to take this work all the way to the end! It was a good story. The only revisions are a few minor grammatical errors. You used 'to' where you should have used ' too' and 'gitty' when it should have been 'giddy'. It was very interesting and I'm not all that into sci-fi. I really enjoyed it and I think you should finish it, if for no other reason than to satisfy my curiosity. lol. Good job!
The piece was well written and evocative in its simplicity. Question, should 'woundrous' be wondrous ? I was kinda confused about that. I did enjoy the piece though. On one hand here is this great discovery that needs to be shared with the world and yet it has to be hidden away for fear of it being stolen! I definitely felt the piece straight off and it was well written and clearly thought out. Good job!
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