Very good, I sense a freer feeling from this. Writing and reading is all in interpretation. So what you wrote and what others read into it are always different. Keep up the good work and keep writing.
Dear Jellyfish,
I too enjoy laying in the sun and I know the pain the winters can bring.
Trust me being from the north, we get a lot of snow here. We are the state the looks like a mitten. The on-going joke is, our state looks like a mitten because you usually need them a lot of the time. But our summers when they are here (at last) are so breath taking.
I enjoyed your piece.
Thanks for sharing and giving me some insight as to what England is like.
Keep writing and keep reading,
George Cord
Very unique piece of work. I too write poetry and I like untraditional styles.Poetry is like art, it can take on a different meaning for each individual. It's good to share different styles, other people get a better idea as a writer seeing that not every line has to rhyme.
Keep up the good work and keep writing, and continue to keep sharing. I am not a very good critic but I do believe this was a very interesting piece of work.
Thanks again for sharing your work with all of us.
Best regards,
George Cord
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