This piece is very beautifully worded and it is very lovely to read of such a strong relationship presented between these two characters. From the time they were very young to their very last day together, their relationship was never weakened or spoiled. It was simply pure love at it's greatest. The kind of love presented between the two is the kind of love I believe everyone should strive towards in everyone relationship they hold. Not only the relationship between the two in this story I appreciate, but also the narrator's love and appreciation for the two characters in the story. It is a very warming feeling to read this story and I hop[e you continue to write because you truly have an incredible talent for works such as these.
I simply love what meaning this poem holds, fore it is very easy at times to forget or perhaps take for granted what God has given to us. I believe you have explained the importance of self patience beautifully as well as the importance of recognizing that self patience is a God-Given gift. Through the course of everyone's life it is, at times, not our first priority to recognize God's love for us and to also be patient with ourselves and to remember that, after all, we can never be perfect. Thank you for this lovely poem to remind me of what is truly important. It is very nice to read about the lovely values of having self-patience when I lack this in myself at times. This poem was greatly appreciated and I hope you keep writing lovely poems such as this.
Hello I saw that you wanted your poem reviewed and I wanted to start off by stating that this poem is very astounding! It is a very strong and powerful poem and I am very glad that I received the chance to review such work as this. I particularly enjoy the line in this poem that states "For even the ancient oaks, Have the desire for changes too." This poem is truly a fine piece. I encourage you greatly to continue to write poems for you are very breathtaking in your work.
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