Great poem deborah debonair. This makes me think of my ex-boyfriend. Yes indeed unrequited love is a horrible thing. I like the rhyme scheme as well. I hope that any unrequited love that happened or didn't happen in your life went over well.
I love your poem but it's so sad. Thank you for this piece of wonderful expression. One thing, nobody is unloveable. I realize that I don't know you or what you've been through, but I know that nobody is unloveable despite your feelings or experience. It's just that some people don't receive what they deserve. You are always loved by JESUS CHRIST. Some people also don't know how to show their love or care either. No matter what you go through, you are always loved. GOD BLESS YOU!!!
Deep piece here heather. I can understand hate towards some people but I always try to go pass it. We should forgive others as the Lord has forgiven us. :)
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