Like your last reviewer, I have been there so this poem holds more emotion for me than what it may for others. It was sweet though. For me the meaning wasn't so much about communication though, but about the if onlys, like you state at the end. Which I think makes this a good poem as well. People can get different meanings out of it without loosing that poetic touch you brought to it. Great job.
I loved this poem so much!
It made me actually start to feel something for the little girl you described. To be able to write like this is such an amazing talent that only God can give! You have a gift! You made me feel what you felt as you wrote this poem. You fall in love with a little girl you don't know and feel almost a dislike for her at the same time!
If you can't tell by my rambling :) I loved it!!!!
Sarah
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