Wow! Your poem brought tears to my eyes. I am a mother of 3 kids , one of them 7 months old. I held him tightly after reading your poem. Let us pray for a more forgiving, more tolerant world. Let us hope for a better tomorrow. I hope each of us learns to bury hatred, discrimination and bigotry.
I love to read poetry but cannot express my feelings in verse. If I ever do, I hope I write as well as you have done. Keep it up. Beautifully written.
Poetry is not really my favourite reading material but I found your poem very pertinent and interesting.
Time does not stay for anyone. Your message that each day should be celebrated with its beauty and joy is very apt. It is the quality of life that matters and not the quantity.
As a woman I can sympathise with anyone who glimpses a grey hair on her head but your poem encourages me to "discard the clock" and take heed of the bounty and beauty that abounds all around us.if Good job.
A very well written and informative piece. I am a Muslim myself and celebrating this Holy Month. Each info is very precise and to the point. I am very happy to see such a balanced article on religious faith on WDC. Good job.
May Allah accept our humble prayers and grant us His blessings.(Ameen)
This was hilarious. Congratulations on such a well written and picturesque piece. The prose is extremely vivid and it had me in stitches. The language was a bit foul for my liking but i guess boys will be boys. A good plot for any Ben Stiller/ Luke wilson movie or maybe jackie Chan's???? Excellent writing
I really enjoyed reading this story. It is very fluent and the ambiance is well created. It reminded me a little of Gone With The Wind. After reading these chapters, I wish to know what happens next. I wish Edna's personality and dreams were described in more detail prior to marriage. The first chapter about work in cotton fields are very well described. Hope to read more of your work. Good Luck.
This is a mesmerizing tale with very believable and life like characters.The prose is fluent and picturesque. I especially like the siblings conversation as it was very realistic. I wish it told a bit more about Grandma's past with Mr. Cherub. Over all a very good effort.
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