Too Cool!!! I loved it!!! (And I KNEW the roesbush was your writing BEFORE the end...I guess because I feel the same way now that I'm writing again!!)
There were a few grammatical errors (and one "to"..."too" hahaha) but over all it read well and kept my attention. Your descriptions were great, not too much, just enough to paint a picture. And your sentiment will, no doubt, be recognized by countless mothers!!!
I enjoyed reading your work AGAIN!!!!!
Munch
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