This story is written quite well. When I first came upon it I skimmed down the page to see how long it was and almost passed on it feeling I lacked the time to invest in such a long short story at the moment. But then I began reading anyway and it held my interest to the end. I am a big fan of the Twilight Zone and so these are the stories I enjoy reading (I only wish I could be so creative, I know "Be careful what you wish for.").
I only see a few spots where a re-reading would catch a few grammatical errors or typos, but other than that I enjoyed it very much.
Today I spent about 3 hours watching The Twilight Zone on Sci Fi network. So when I saw this category I was already in the "Zone". I really enjoyed this story it was truly in the spirit of the TZ format. Very well written and the descriptions are vivid. The only spoiler was the description under the title, it had prepared me too much for what should have been a surprise ending.
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