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Review of Fairy Pond  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wonderful word pictures!!

My favorite
Overhead, flocks of migrating birds, colors like mini explosions in the clear blue sky, head to where Winter’s icy touch cannot reach.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well told story. I believed every word.
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Review of The Day I Died  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Good descriptions and word pictures.

But then the wind began to softly echo my name.
well done line!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well done!

Great desciptions and interesting personal touches.

It does make me want to take the trip.

Youy could easily use it as an advertising brochure for the train. (or is it already?)
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I am sure you have heard about the people who die doing what they love--- skiing into trees at 60 miles an hour. How can you love that? Nice story- well done dialogue.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I am impressed with your vocabulary and choice of words. You sound well educated and genteel without sounding stuffy. I always wanted to see Austrlia and might make it in my next life. Enjoyed the story
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Review of Remember when  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Very well done and truthful to the point of pain. Great Story.
My favotite part:
(God bless the person who made it legal to tie up my children!)
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Review of The Grim Weeper  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Unratable.)
Good dialogue,good descriptions. great twist on the ending, Well done Story
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Interesting story. I enjoyed it because it is the first one I have read about such a long term relationship with the monster under your bed. Enjoyable and well done.
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Review of Sleeping Beauty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A nice start desperatly in need of an ending. What happened next? Surely you could tell more.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well done story. The emotions Luis felt are very well descibed. The ending jumps up and slaps you in the face. Good job.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You entered into an insane mind with great skill. The way you have expressed the thought process is uncanny.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good
Funny

I wish I could be as wordy as you. I think my stuff is too short.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Good images and descriptions.

2 questions.
Why was the electicity still on, after a year? If I am a week late with the payment, I get nasty letters.

What type of whiskey burns? Even 100 proof is still half water.
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