I love this so much! It really makes you realize things that you probably never would have thought about before. I hope you continue to write, and open many peoples eyes.
I really enjoyed the feelings that this put off. Maybe a different couple of words here and there, also more detail would have made it better. Continue to write!
I feel like you have the capability to write so well, but that you just don't want to try as hard as you can! I hope that you rethink poetry, or writing in general.
I love this poem, It feels like real life relationships. You feel the emotions from the words, and the sadness of her heart breaking into little broken pieces.
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