Subject: the love that a man truly feels for the woman in his life is seen so clearly, and the fact that he knows how to love and see love because of his mother is beautiful!
Chacters: the boy and his mom; you can almost see a son sitting down to talk to him mom about the girl of his dreams. The girl he is describing is everything a woman should be! Great Job!
Descriptions: are beautifully done! I can picture the heart of this girl as he talks about her.
Great Job!
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I can understand the concept of this poem, although it is fictional I was once where this person is. I am so thankful than I'm not now. This is very well written and will probably speak to many people.
I don't know much about poetry, but I really enjoyed reading this. Write ON!
sincerly,
DeAnna
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