*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/highhopes/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/8
Review Requests: OFF
413 Public Reviews Given
428 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 -8- 9 ... Next
176
176
Review of Expression  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.0)


Good job, could use more of you in it. Reading the work other writers should help you.

Get a special friend to discuss your inner thoughts with and that might help.

Take one important moment in your life and try making a report on it, but add extra excitement, humor and description.
177
177
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.0)


You might want to quit starting your lines with so many of the same words. (we) I am new at this, it might be o.k.

Other than that, it is well written. I ejoyed the different type humor that hits you at the end. I have a horse and I know they can be a caring friend
178
178
Review of Little Child  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)


Good job, filled with a sweet and gentle depth of emotion not often seen.
179
179
Review of Thinking  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)


Well written,

Is this what they call being on the outside looking in ? I'm teasing.

It is great that you can remove the thoughts that you don't want. Some people can't handle that and in up in depression.
180
180
Review of I Warned You  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (5.0)


Great job, descriptive, serious with a sense of humor.

Thanks for sharing your work. I needed this for the ending of a dull day.

ONE I WON'T FORGET
181
181
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)

well written, filled with negative and positive emotion

Leaves you wondering, what is next.
182
182
Review of Soul Mate  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (5.0)

Good job

There is a soul mate out there for everyone. It took me 54 years to find mine, but thank God I have him now. He is everything you wrote about and more. He married me knowing I have parkinson's, but it doesn't affect his love.
183
183
Review of Inadequate  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (5.0)


Good job with a different depth of emotion not seen every day.

The last line saying that the truth would hurt more than a lie gives a completely different aspect on looking at the poem as a whole. This leaves a openess for the imagination to wonder what else is going on.
184
184
Review of Sweet Lil one  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)


Good job

I think we all should think this way. After all, a child is a gift from God. I wish they could be in our care always.

Great emotional depth that gets the point accross
185
185
Review by highhopes
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Well written, composed with a depth of courage that not many people have.
186
186
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)

Great story sad yet promise worthy
187
187
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)

Great way to get the point accross.
188
188
Review of My Love  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)


Well written, the emotional level is great

After a abusive marriage of 32 years, I have remarried, your work describes our love exactly.

keep up the good work
189
189
Review of Alone  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)

Good job bringing point out'

If you look hard enough, you are never really alone.
190
190
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)

Well written with a great emotional depth.

We must first bring strength from within to handle lifes problems. The majority of people don't think they have that strength but it is there
191
191
Review by highhopes
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)


WEll WTITTEN

I never knew to speak softly, meant that way. unforgetable
192
192
Review of ~Black Satin~  
Review by highhopes
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great job
descriptive
Brings out a diferent depth of emotion in each reader.

A pleasure to read.
193
193
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great jobs

Our dreams can take us anywhere.
194
194
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)
well written
descriptive
informative
Mike could have shown a little more excitement.
195
195
Review of Singing Wind  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)


well written very descriptive
196
196
Review by highhopes
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well written

Iagree with Lincolns quote

You have to love yourself and decide what you want
197
197
Review by highhopes
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Great work ,
detailed, descriptive, emotional

I enjoyed it
198
198
Review of Heaven's Daughter  
Review by highhopes
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Great work, well written

Attention getter Huge depth of emotion expressed. Betrayal, sorrow and
pain

Thanks for sharing
199
199
Review of Lock and Key  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)

Good job

emotional and encouraging

Almost everyone needs that special someone with a key to their heart.
What is so tragic is sometimes a forced entry can ruin a heart.

I enjoyed reading your work.
200
200
Review of I BELIEVE IN YOU  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)

Well written

A good depth of emotion shown in more than one way. We all need someone to stand by us.
222 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 9 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/highhopes/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/8