okay buddy this review is not an honest one, but i require the gift points immediately. I assure to write an honest review right after i finish reading the entire thing. It might take a couple of days - hope you dont take it otherwise buddy, pls i need it to save my account
wow man! that was something! sorry for the informal review but haven't read a great offbeat story like that in a while now. It is genuinely funny, I personally did not find it witty but there is no forced attempt at comedy. The story is naturally funny.
Five stars - very surreal and at the same time very personal. But a lot of obscurity when the main character enters the different world and snaps out of it. I could understand the main character feeling someone's pain from some time, way back, but was it about the stone all the time - is it that the stone has the power to bring these visions or is it that both of them have the same soul and that's why they both felt it?! But i guess that's the beauty of it all.
Hmmm...you know bhodu, I agree about that meeting your friends part. I've felt this myself, if you are detached with your friends for a long enough time, you kinda have re-introduce yourself to them.Like start off afresh, because old memories haunt you, you wish you were never apart. But life's like that I guess. You cannot restart a friendship like that, even though it sounds cool and has a catch to it "restart your friendship", but it doesn't work that way. Once something is gone, it remains gone. And i don't mean physical separation by 'gone' - I mean mental dislocation. If you departed not on a good note, like you had a fight and then you stopped meeting or hanging out with each other, the bitterness kinda remains in the depth of the heart, somewhere in a dark corner maybe...but nostalgia...ahh yes, that's an awesome feeling, it's not pain, not mere pain of missing someone, it's something so much more.
I love the crescendo in your article, it starts off with an unknown person who helps a distracted person on the streets - it could have gone anywhere from there, but this incident made you realise this - "This is what we all mean and feel for our old friends who are lost in the journey of our life and meet them often as strangers. Very few are remembered by names but they always remain in our hearts and leaving them again by wishing ‘Good Luck’ and ‘Good bye’ is another way to keep their memories fresh in our mind. This is a common experience for many people and this kind of feeling sometimes, creates a nostalgic mood for a while", these realisations are greatest qualities of a seer. Not everybody can understand, everything is not meant for everyone.
Carry on!
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