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Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
hi, this is a nice poem I think yiou did a good job on it. people create wonderful and romantic pieces in their own way;./ you have done this and did a good job on it as well. I can appreciate the value of your poem it was a good little poem. I thank you for sharing it with us all her on writing.com;
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Review of The Tree Sap  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
hi I'm with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. I thought this was a beautiful poem, I especially liked the opening where you talk about the appearance of the place which they were. I thought you touched many senses in your description which is important in writing. I liked your poem you did a good job on it. I thought the word choice was good. keep writing.

-honeysuklerose-

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Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
hi, I'm with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. and I just read Slippery wet disaster. I thought it was pretty good,it was very informative. It was like a warning, it is important for people to read your poem because It has some useful dialogue in it. Warnings so to speak.
I did not see any mistakes with your work. you did good.

-honeysuklerose-

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Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hi, i found this item in your port because it is your anniversary, I say have a good anniversary. this is a sports poem, i like baseball and softball, and basketball and hockey and boxing those are the only kinds of sports i like. i think you are going to hit a homerun with this one. i really liked it.

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Review of Crop Circle  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
I just tried to read this story but I'm sorry I just have to say it was certainly awful, I think you used the phrase "parental unit" so many times I wanted to scream. I understand you have to keep the story under 300 words but I feel the story was weak.

but you keep trying
and Have a nice day!
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Review of Love of the Gods  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hi ya tim, this is a beautiful poem. I hope you don't mind me doing this little mini raid on your portfolio. I found all of these poems on the auto-rewards page. I think this is my favorite of the one's you have listed. It talks about God, which I think is great. Not enough people give him the credit he deserves ya know...
any way this is an excellent poem so good I'm gonna give ya five stars.
it is well worth it. I loved the rhyming it really made this poem.

-honeysuklerose-

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Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
hi ya Tim, I think you must be in love with someone. is it a new love or has it existed for a while and you've just reawakened. The poem is well written and I've really enjoyed reading it. I like rhyming poems and you've done a great job with this one. I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. and I think you've done a great job on this poem.

-honeysuklerose-
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Review of Laying So Close  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Wow Tim, time to take a tender rest.
this is a poem that really did make me blush. It rhymed and it had a message about having sex. It kind of embarrassed me while I read it. but it is your feelings and emotions put down on paper. your art. and it is not bad. in any way.
Any type of feelings expressed can be poetry, keep going...
-honeysuklerose-
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Review of Lead Me  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.0)
This is a pretty good try at writing poetry accept it really doesn't make very much sense. perhaps to make it stand out you should use different analogies. your first time being in love is unbelievable and explosive perhaps you should show that.
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Review of Sleepless  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
HI HOW ARE YOU, MY NAME IS HONEYSUKLEROSE, I JUST READ YOUR POEM OR YOUR HAIKU CALLED "SLEEPLES" I THOUGHT IT WAS VERY UNIQUE. I NEVER READ ONE LIKE IT BEFORE. YOU HAVE THE
RIGHT SYLLABLE COUNT AND EVERYTHING. IT IS KIND OF SILLY THOUGH!

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Review of Silence  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Sabaka, I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window.
I would like to read and review your poem today. I thought it flowed well and the rhymes where good as was the rhythm. I like your word choices. it is a pretty good poem. congratulations on being nominated for the Quills award
good luck.

honeysuklerose
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Review of Dawn Prayers  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello ProsperousSnow,(Neva), I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. and I read your prayer today and I just have to say it was so lovely and very charming. I love to read prayers I also like to write prayers for I love God dearly. your writing is very good but I just have one question do you mean mourning doves as if they are mourning something or do you mean morning doves like the time of day?
Just wondering!

-honeysuklerose-
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Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sean, I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. I'd like to review this poem today for the group. it is a lovely and remarkable poem, I enjoyed it I thought the word choices were excellent. it was formal without being stuffy. it was just right in my words. was she a true angel or just a lovely lady sitting there.

-honeysuklerose-
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Review of Number Ten  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hey Lynda-Breathless in Texas, I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. and I really got a kick out of "Number Ten" I think that was a hoot, it really made me chuckle.
I can just see a young lad going out to the chicken coup and hens scattering around everywhere and a big red rooster comes strutting in like the cock of the walk. it is a really funny poem. keep up the very good work, I love to laugh.

-honeysuklerose-
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Review of Dragonfly  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hello again Bear, If you recall I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. and I hop around giving reviews for those who deserve them. and you deserve a review, your writing is so prolific, so sweet and I just loved this premise of this one. on dragonfly wings, I think this was original and uplifting. I can close my eyes and see a young girl flying on the wings of a dragonfly. though quite impossible, in our dreams all things are possible. Your writing is very good, thanks for sharing this item.
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Review of The Sirens.  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello inkwell, I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. and I am going to give you a review for our group. This item was awesome, I found it on the Auto-rewards page, and I found it to be very entertaining. It was like an old world fairy tale with out the happy ever after ending. I think you found your talent well and drew the bucket in.

-honeysuklerose-
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Review of Pisces's Son  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello C.O., I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. I would like to review this item, I found it on the auto-review page along with the other one I reviewed. You certainly have a way with words, this was a good and real piece that made me see someone high on drugs literally smashing their head into something.
Your writing is prolific,very creative.

-honeysuklerose-
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Review of I am Sam  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
hello luvinmypoppingcorn, I am with the
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. and I would like to give you a review of your poem. I found this item on the auto-rewards page and I wanted to read it. The title is good and so is the item description. Your poem had a good rhythm and it flowed well from one sentence to the next sentence. I have to say it was a bit morbid in context for my taste. A little bloody and gory even gross. You seem to be able to write well but I think I like a nice emotional poem better than a horror poem.

-honeysuklerose-
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Review of Confessional  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello C.O., I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. I want to review this item today. I found it on the auto-review page and I thought the title was interesting so I gave it a look. Your a catholic I bet.
I can tell by your poem or at least the people in the poem are. I have to admit I don't understand the last stanza, it seems odd to me. but the rest of the poem I understood well and I liked it. I feel the last stanza is not clear in its meaning.

-honeysuklerose-
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Review of Cockroach  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Kalixta, I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. and I wanted to read and review this item for our group. I'm afraid to say the meaning escapes me.
I can only assume from the title you are speaking of roaches. This is not the correct syllable count for a Haiku.
I believe the Haiku is 5,7,5. you can double check that but I'm pretty sure that is what it is.

-honeysuklerose-
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Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Bear, I am here today with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window. and I want to review this item because I found it while surfing the auto-rewards page. this is a love letter unlike none *I have ever seen before, the man is torn and feels like a failure because he can't find the right words. In reality the whole poem are the right words in my mind. I felt your writing had sort of a light comedic spin to it but it was drenched in emotion as well. I think you did a very good job writing this poem.

-honeysuklerose-
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Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi,I'm with the Power Reviewers and I want to review you because you gave me a review and I saw this and thought I would repay the favor.
I think this is an excellent endeavor you have chosen to get involved with.
I like the interactive stories and have been reading one of yours called "Holiday Kids", I liked the idea behind that story, but I do think it would have been better had you left Santa, Pooh, and Cupid out of it. but it is being well written by writer Lisa Noe~kittylove, who has made the only two additions to the story. but I feel your overall idea is exceptional.

-honeysuklerose-

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Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tim, I found this poem on the pay for review section and thought I'd give it a good read. Boy I'm glad I did this was a well written and beautiful item. my favorite part is where you talked about God and said:::
"The righteous tunes of souls’ retreat
And God's adoring ways.":::

This was really a great item to read very loving.

-honeysuklerose-

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Review of Little Fish  Open in new Window.
Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Jo, this is a dark and sad poem. I think the woman needs to get some help, killing yourself is never an answer, or at least that was my take on the poem. She lost someone dear to her so she drown herself, is that the message of the poem, or did I misunderstand? I think you need to go back and capitalize all of your I pronouns. also some of the poem flowed really well and had a nice rhythm and other parts was long and fooled with the rhythm of the entire poem. but all in all it was a descent enough poem.

-Honeysuklerose-

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Review by kittyloving Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, Your poem "A Mightier Justice", is very good I liked the rhymes they were perfect rhymes. The message was clear and it had a nice rhythm and flowed well from start to finish. I did not see any spots where it seemed to be forced or where it did not make since, this was a nice job writing this poem. Thanks for sharing, Write On!

-Honeysuklerose-

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