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This poem is a good poem for little kids who enjoy their ABC's. It is a cute poem that any little kid would like. Keep writing!!
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Your story was sad and it explained a lot about getting abused. I now know what it is like being abused by your story. I really hope that your life has gotten a lot better. Keep writing!!! You also had No mistakes.
Silverindian,
This story was good. You should add more detail like who Grandma Lulu is. Is she your Grandma or is she a fake characters Grandma? Besides that, the story was ok.
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