Nice job! I enjoyed how your poem progressed to reveal the identity of "He." It also made me wonder what you believe about eternity, especially since you want to know if those beliefs will "carry you through."
I appreciated the opportunity to read and review your poem.
Physical death is a once in a lifetime experience.
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