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21 Public Reviews Given
21 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
If you don't want to spend 1000 points email me and I will do it for less or nothing! I would love to review your piece! *Smile*
I'm good at...
I'm good at reviewing short story's and articles I believe your writing can never be perfect, so if you're looking for an easy review, I'll still do that, just let me know.
Favorite Genres
My favourite genres are scientific, children's fantasy, and mystery but I'll be glad to do anything!
Least Favorite Genres
My least favourite is poetry and really long story's but I would still be glad to review it.
I will not review...
I will review anything you need as long as your story isn't a chapter book or ridiculously long.
Public Reviews
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Review of Jeanne's Fight  Open in new Window.
Review by Ari Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your hook was great. It definitely captured my interest. The story was very interesting and I loved the sci-fi vibe it gave. Your writing style is unique and you did a great job describing events and objects, however, I did have some trouble picturing the characters. I do think if you could improve anything in this piece, it would be adding more description to the characters. As for spelling and grammar, you did perfect (not that it would matter too much) I couldn't find any spelling errors. You did great!

Keep writing, Ari
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Review by Ari Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You need to turn this into a book, a series, something! This was so amazing, I swear, I've been going through, doing reviews and this is the best thing I've read today by far. I've always had the idea of writing things that are based off of classic stories, I find having that not so PG twist made it that much better. I can't find one little thing to critique you on here!
Keep doing what you're doing, Ari


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Review by Ari Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of Thank You, Father  Open in new Window.
Review by Ari Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of Family  Open in new Window.
Review by Ari Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of Over The Moon  Open in new Window.
Review by Ari Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of Midnight Angel  Open in new Window.
Review by Ari Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review of There's No Point  Open in new Window.
Review by Ari Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, This was fantastic. I think you may qualify for a contest I have on my page! You have the potential to win a merit badge! If you're interested then I have a page in my highlighted with more information.

I hope you consider, Ari
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Review by Ari Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
The story was amazing and i really loved it! the detail in it was amazing and i really hope you keep writing! you could really hear the voice in it and you put your story in paragraphs which I know seems like something little but it is something that I personally struggle to remember.
keep on writing, Ari
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Review of Silence  Open in new Window.
Review by Ari Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great job!!
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