I love how you chose the title, and I absolutely love the contents of the poem. You really see the world as I do, I don't think that humans are really doing the best for the world, and that we are that ignorant. I LOVE your poem, you should make some others, they don't have to be like this, but you're quite good at making poems.
Oh my gosh, thank you so much for asking me to read this, I LOVE IT! I think you really do have a way with words, you're amazing, really, truly amazing. I don't think that anyone else could write something this beautiful without already having there work published, have you? I adore your poems, I truly hope you'll make some more so that I may read them. Here's some gift points for encouragement!
I love poems that talk about life, some never even get close to the real thing, but you did great! I also love that you included your love for your wife, and how your life changed for the better when you finally met her. Here's 50 GP's just to show you what a good writer you are, you should make more like these, I would love to read them. Have a go, I'd love to watch the show!
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