Learnt a lot from the piece. Loved the description of every scene. Humour is light and touches the heart. I very much agree with the topic, life has changed so much after technology growth. People seem way much more connected these days and lives have become more public than ever. Love the part where your buddy introduced you to the pretty lady. Also shows the great deal our buddies play in our lives. All in all, i loved the piece. Though i'm just a beginner, i feel elevated at the simplicity of the piece. It wasn't hard to understand as the use of english is really simple and the subject goes very well with the topic. Do keep writting lots more!
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