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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hey Mate, the way that you've opened your piece was good, it worked quite well in grabbing my attention and pulling me in, one thing i would recommend is to add tag lines to your dialogue, this may help to increase the flow of your writing, other than that, great job.
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