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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This was a great read! I loved the cheerful "do-gooding" neighbour driving your well-meaning protagonists back to the city.

The piling-on of aggravations was also well done.

Your spelling and grammar are well in order, so nothing to worry about there.

The slight bit of criticism I have is that your closing sentence could have been punchier, but I am personally not sure what to suggest. Maybe come back to the piece with fresh eyes and see if something can come to you.

Thanks for this little story, I had fun reading and reviewing it.


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