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Review of The Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
One thing i must say....it was an extraordinary plot.... i liked it

First the positive points-:
1.nice plot
2.nice story
3.good combination of words
4.narrator's views

The negative points-:
1.I didnt like the samantha's role in the story...may be if there were some more details about her i would have liked it
2.i didnt like the short aspect of the story
3.Lost in peace, i drifted away ..... i felt personally that the ending was incomplete.

anyways,

thanks

Jas Ahuja

visit my blog
http://jasahuja.blogspot.com
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Review of love is lost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
nice attempt...
i got the inner feeling u wanted to say but still i wud say must improve..

why dont u add more stanzas
well just a suggestion...

read my short story on-:
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1166...

i wud luv 2 c yr comments....infact wud luv to c comments of every1 who believe in luv.
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